Smacked By A Beavertail – a 99-Word-Story

May 30, 2023, prompt: In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a beaver slap. It can be an actual tail slap warning on the water or an imitation. Is a beaver slap the name of something — a new type of burger, perfume, or a sci-fi gadget? Take ecological and poetic licenses. Go where the prompt leads!


One bitter cold day in February, we boarded a tour bus heading north, destination, Ottawa, Canada, Winterlude, a month-long festival. Anticipating many outdoor activities, we packed our warmest winter gear.

A four-hour ride dropped us at our hotel, the center of activity. Eager to get immersed in the festive spirit, we set off for the Canal, a prime location. As we got close, we heard the joyful excitement of the crowds. A sweet smell tantalized our tastebuds, we found flat puffy pastries dusted with cinnamon sugar. Canadians call it a Beavertail. We tried it, SMACK, we were tail smacked.

Here in the States we simply call it fried dough. It’s a staple at fairs and festivals across the country. Have you ever had fried dough or Beavertail? Do you call it by another name?

If you enjoy 99 Word Sttories, check out the last Collection, Secrets.